We have been learning about how to write advertisements of other things, i did Christmas since its in 31 days, isnt it exciting? Yet this year has gone fast and has been interesting, each day of the year since the start i have been thinking at the end of each day ''Tomorrow could be better than today'' i need everyone else to remember that too.
what do you think i could of done to make this post better?
Madison, this is a good ad. You have put some interesting things on here to let us know what to do. A thought for your next advert is to think about how many pictures you want to put on. Oh my gosh, I better get shopping though!
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